The ability to explain complex, technical matters with ease, grace, and simplicity so that nonspecialist readers understand almost effortlessly is one of the most important skills you can develop as a technical writer. "Translating" difficult-to-read technical content matters because so much of technical writing is aimed at nonspecialist audiences. These audiences include important people such as supervisors, executives, investors, financial officers, government officials, and, of course, customers.
This chapter provides you with some strategies for "translating" technical content, that is, specific strategies you can use to make difficult technical content easier for nonspecialist readers to understand.
Use your understanding of your audience to decide
- What content to include in the document
- What content to exclude from the document
- How to discuss the content you do include in the document
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Translating means supplying the right kinds of content to make up for the reader's lack of knowledge or capability. Translating thus enables readers to understand and use your document. Some combination of the techniques discussed in this chapter should help you create a readable, understandable translation:
| Defining unfamiliar terms | The "in-other-words" technique |
| Comparing to familar things | Comparing to what it is not |
| Comparing to familar things | Posing rhetorical questions |
| Elaborating the process | Explaining the importance or significance |
| Providing description | Providing illustration |
| Reviewing theoretical background | Providing historical background |
| Providing examples and applications | Providing the human perspective |
| Shorter sentences and paragraphs | Stronger transitions |
This list by no means exhausts the possibilities. Other techniques include:
- Headings. See the section on using headings that break up text and emphasize points and on how to construct headings that guide readers from section to section.
- Lists. See the section on constructing lists that break up text and emphasize points and on how to construct headings that guide readers from section to section.
Note to readers: Move your mouse pointer over the thin dotted line links in the following examples to see discussion.
Defining unfamiliar terms
Defining potentially unfamiliar terms in a report is one of the most important ways to make up for readers' lack of knowledge in the report subject.
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Facial Characteristics of FAS Victims
Taken as a whole, the face of patients with fetal alcohol syndrome (FAS), is very distinctive. Structural deficiencies are thought to be the result of reduced cellular proliferation in the developing stages of the embryo because of the direct action of the alcohol. The face has a drawn-out appearance with characteristics that include short palpebral fissures, epicanthic folds, low nasal bridge, a short upturned nose, indistinct philtrum, small midface, and a thinned upper vermilion.
Palpebral featuresHere, palpebral features is term being defined. are the longitudinal openings between the eyelids.
In FAS victims, they tend to be short possibly because the eye size is so small. Most deficiency of the eye is reflected in these shortened palpebral fissures.
Epicanthic foldsNow, it is epicanthic folds are the vertical folds of skin on either side of the nose, sometimes covering the inner corner of the eye. They are present as a normal characteristic in persons of certain races and also occur as a congenital malformation in patients with FAS.
The philtrumNow, philtrum is term being defined. is the vertical groove in the middle of the upper lip and below the nose region. It tends to be smooth in patients with fetal alcohol syndrome, and as a consequence the upper lip may lack its usual indentation bow.
And finally, vermilionThis term could have been much better defined.
The upper, red portion of the upper lip is the vermilion; it is often very thin in patients with FAS. The thinned vermilion is a major feature in contributing to the overall drawn-out appearance of the face....
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Using definitions to translate technical discussion
Comparing to familiar things
Comparing technical concepts to ordinary and familiar things in our daily lives makes them easier to understand. For example, things in the world of electronics and computer—a downright intimidating area for many people—can be compared to channels of water, the five senses of the human body, gates and pathways, or other common things. Notice how comparison (highlighted) is used in these passages:
The helical configuration of the DNA strands is not haphazard.
The nitrogen bases on each strand align themselves to form nitrogen base pairs. The pairs are T-A and C-G. Each pair is held together by hydrogen bonds. The pairing of the bases serves to fasten the two helical nucleotide strands together
in much the same way as the teeth of a zipper hold the zipper together. The existence of the complementary base pairs explain the constant ratios of T/A and C/G. For every T there must be a complementary A and for every G there must be a complementary C.
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All the death and all the misery from a virus so small that 2-1/2 million of them in a line would take up one inch. Flu viruses fall into three types: A, B, and C. Type A, the most variable, causes pandemics as well as regular seasonal outbreaks; type B causes smaller outbreaks and is just now receiving greater attention; type C rarely causes serious health problems.
In appearance, a flu virus somewhat resembles the medieval maceThe flu virus is compared to a medieval mace.—a ball of iron studded with spikes; moreover, individual part of the flu virus are compared to indivdual parts of the mace. These spikes are two surface proteins called hemagglutinin (HA) and neuraminidase (NA). Inside the virus is a thick tangle of genes. In many other viruses, a number of different genes fit onto one strand of nucleic acid; but each flu gene is a separate segment of ribonucleic acid (RNA)—eight threads in all. Hemagglutinin is the substance that like medieval mace bashesThe mace metaphor provides a crude but vivid picture of the influenza virus at work. into a cell during infection and allows the virus access to the cell interior where it can replicate. Neuramindase permits all the viral offspring to break free of the host cell once replication is complete.
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Comparison used for translation
Elaborating the process
Explaining in detail the processes involved in the report subject can also help readers. Consider a paragraph like this one, containing only a sketchy reference to the process:
| The Video Alert and Control dashboard system, a newly developed system to help drivers avoid accidents, graphically projects an image of hazards in the road. |
This brief reference can be converted into a more complete explanation as is illustrated here:
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The Video Alert and Control dashboard systems uses a number of components to help drivers avoid accidents. The infrared detector is the key detecting device in that it searches for warm objects in or near the path ahead of the car. The infrared detector senses the upcoming trouble well before the driver by sensing warm-bloodedness and then alerts the driver. The infrared detector also senses the heat of oncoming traffic.
All of these objects are shown graphically on the video screen. To differentiate wildlife from other cars, the x-ray unit is used to check for metal in the object ahead. Thus, if a warm object is detected with metal in it, the computer reads it as a car and shows it on the screen as a yellow dot. On othe other hand, if no metal is detected in the warm object, it is read as an animal and plotted as a red dot.... |
Elaborating the process as a way of translation
Providing descriptive detail
Descriptions also help nonspecialist readers by making the report discussion more concrete and down-to-earth:
Artificial HeartAn artificial heart is a mechanical pump that replaces the ventricles in your heart when they aren't working as they should. Ventricles are the lower chambers of your heart. You have a left and a right ventricle. When you receive a total artificial heart, the device replaces both ventricles. 
The artificial heart does the job the ventricles can no longer do: pump blood where it needs to go. An artificial heart connects to your heart's two upper chambers (atria) and your major arteries. How does an artificial heart work? A portable air compressor (driver) outside your body powers the artificial heart and keeps it pumping at a steady rhythm. The driver pushes air through two drivelines (tubes). These tubes connect the artificial heart to the driver. The tubes stick out of your body through the skin in your stomach (abdomen). You can recharge the driver battery at home or in your car. It may seem strange to have a mechanical device in your chest. But artificial hearts have given people like you the help they need while waiting for a heart transplant. ——Cleveland Clinic. Artificial Heart, 2025 |
Description used to translate technical content
Providing illustrations
Illustrations—typically, simple diagrams—can help readers underatand technical descriptions and explanations of processes. You can see the use of illustration in the FAS example above: epicanthic folds and the philtrum are labels in the diagram.
Providing examples and applications
Equally useful in translating complex or abstract technical content are examples or explanations of how a thing can be used. For example, if you are trying to explain a LINUX command, showing how it is used in an example program helps readers greatly. If you are explaining a new design for a solar heating and cooling system, showing its application in a specific home can help also.
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Continuous Speech
Continuous speech causes many problems in computerized speech recognition. In fluent speech, many words overlap. For example,One example. when the "t" in "cat" combines the "y" in "your," the phrase, "You gave the cat your dinner," sounds like, "You gave the catcher dinner". Some words have built-in pauses that are often longer than word boundaries.
For example, the word "vector"Another example has a natural pause between the "c" and the "t." In an actual experiment, a machine listened to the phrase, "recognize speech," and printed, "wreck a nice beach".
As vocabularies increase, words are more likely to become confused. Some words are subparts of others, such as "plea" and "please,"Still more examples while some words have similar acoustics, such as "what" and "watt." Heidi E. Cootes, Report on Computers that Recognize Speech, University of Texas at Austin |
Examples used in translation
Now here is a passage with a longer, extended example:
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...The user "scrolls" the worksheet right and left or up and down to bring different parts of it into view. Each position (that is, each intersection of a column and a row) on a screen corresponds to a record in memory. The user sets up his own matrix by assigning to each record either a label, an item of data or a formula; the corresponding position on the screen displays the assigned the label, the entered datum or the result of applying the formula.
Consider a simple example.This entire paragraph is both an application and example. A company comptroller might enter the label Cash in the record corresponding to Column B, Row 1 (position B1), Reserves at C1 and Total at D1. He might then enter $300,000 at B2, $500,000 at C2 and the formula +B2+C2 at position D2. The screen will show $800,000 at D2. If the comptroller changes the B2 entry to $200,000, the program will reduce the total displayed at D2 to $700,000. Moreover, what is entered in records B2 and C2 need not be primary data; it can be a function of data held in other records.
Hoo-Mi D. Toong and Amar Gupta, "Personal Computers," Scientific American |
Discussion of applications used to translate technical discussion
Shorter sentences and paragraphs
As obvious a technique as it may seem, reducing the length of sentences can make a technical discussion easier to understand. Consider the following pairs of example passages, the second versions of which contain shorter sentences. (The passage still needs other translating techniques, particularly definitions, but the shorter sentences do make it more readable.) Notice too that shorter paragraphs can help in the translation process, not only in the example below but throughout this chapter.
Original version: longer sentences
| UV-flourescence was determined on aliquots of the hexane extracts of subsurface water using the Perkin-Elmer MPF-44A dual-scanning flourescence spectrophotometer upon mousse sample NOAA-16, considered the best representative of cargo oil. Every day that samples were processed, a new calibration curve was developed from serial dilutions of the reference mousse (NOAA-16) at an emission wavelength of ca. 360 nm, and other samples were compared to it as the standard. Emission was scanned from 275-500 nm, offset 25 nm from the excitation wavelength, with the major peak occurring at 360 nm for the reference mousse solutions. In each sample, the concentration of flourescent material, a total oil estimate, was calculated from its respective flourescence, using the linear relationship of flourescence vs. concentration of the reference mousse "standard," with a correction factor applied to account for the reference mousse containing only about 30 percent. |
Revised version: shorter sentences
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UV-flourescence was determined on aliquots of the hexane extracts of the subsurface water. These measurements were performed using a Perkin-Elmer MPF-44A dual-scanning flourescence spectrophotometer. Mousse sample NOAA-16 was used as the best representative of cargo sample. Other samples were compared to it as the standard.
Every day that samples were processed, a new calibration curve was developed from serial dilutions of the reference mousse (NOAA-16). Tests were run at an emission wavelength of ca. 360 nm. Emission was scanned from 275-500 nm, offset 25 nm from the excitation wavelength. The major peak occurred at 360 nm for the reference mousse solutions. In each sample, the concentration of flourescent material, a total estimate, was calculated from its respective flourescence. The linear relationship of flourescence vs. concentration of the reference mousse "standard." A correction factor was applied to account for the reference mousse containing only about 30 percent oil. |
Shorter paragraphs and sentences for translation purposes
Stronger transitions and overviews
Transitions and overviews guide readers through text. In difficult technical material, transitions and overviews are important. (For in-depth discussion, see transitions.)
- Repetition of key words. As unlikely as it may seem, using the same words for the same ideas is a critical technique for comprehension in technical discussions. In other words, don't refer to the hard drive as a "fixed-disk drive" one place and as "DASD" (an old IBM term meaning direct access stationary drive) in another. Same goes for verbs: stick with either "boot up" or "system reset," and don't vary.
- Arrangement of key words. Equally important is how you introduce keywords in sentences. If your focus stays on the topic in each sentence of a paragrah, place the keyword at or near the beginning of the second and following sentences. However, if the topic focus shifts from one sentence to the next, use the old-to-new pattern: start the following sentence with the old topic and end the sentence with the new topic. For more detail, see the discussion of topic strings.
- Transition words and phrases. Examples of transition words and phrases are "for example," "however," and so on. When the discussion is particularly difficult and when repetition and arrangement of keywords is not enough, use transition words and phrases. See transitions.
- Reviews of topics covered and topics to be covered. At certain critical moments within and between paragraph (or groups of paragraphs) occurs a transitional device that either captures what has been discussed in a short phrase, previews what is to be discussed in the following paragraphs, or both. The latter device is also called a topic sentence.
The "in-other-words" technique
Another way of translating technically difficult content is to give the reader two "looks" at the same idea by restating the difficult-to-understand version in simpler terms. The second, simpler explanation is often preceded by a phrase such as "in other words" (IOW). Here are two examples of this IOW technique:
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With no electric field present, semiconductor electrons are quite happy to remain bonded in their valence bands. Only when an electric field is applied or the temperature is raised (heat can also increase electron energy) do the valence electrons begin to break their bonds, jump the energy band gap and become conduction electrons.
When a bond is broken, a vacancy or hole is left. The region in which this vacancy exists has a net positive charge. The area where the freed electron exists has a net negative charge. In a semiconductor, both electrons and holes contribute to electrical conduction. If a valence electron from another bond fills the hole without ever gaining sufficient energy to become free, the vacancy appears in a new place. It is as if a positive charge (equal to that on a electron) has moved to a new location. In other words,The IOW method says the same thing again—in either different words, simpler words, or both. conduction in semiconductors is the result of two separate and independent particles carrying opposite charges and moving opposite directions under the influence of an applied electric field.
David Oakley, Introduction to Semiconductor Theory, University of Texas at Austin. Fatigue Fatigue is a phenomenon that has plagued engineers for years. It is especially bothersome when metals are involved. Simply stated,The IOW method says the same thing again—in either different words, simpler words, or both. Notice that an example follows—another translating technique. fatigue is the slow growth of a crack that ultimately leads to failure after a number of load reversals. A paperclip breaking after repeated bending is an example of fatigue. The process by which fatigue leads to failure can be divided into three stages: initiation, propagation, and failure. The nature of the second stage, propagation, is what enables composites to be immune to failure. |
The "in-other-words" technique
Posing rhetorical questions
In technical writing, you occasionally see questions posed to the readers. Such questions are not there for readers to answer; they are meant to stimulate readers' curiosity, renew their interest, introduce a new section of the discussion, or allow for a pause:
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When an animal runs, its legs swing back and forth through large angles to provide balance and forward drive. We have found that such swinging motions of the leg do not have to be explicitly programmed for a machine but are a natural outcome of the interactions between the controllers for balance and attitude. Suppose the vehicle is traveling at a constant horizontal rate and is landing with its body upright.
What must the attitude controller do during the stance to maintain the upright attitude? Notice that this rhetorical question gives readers a chance to pause and focus their attention It must make sure that no torques are generated at the hip. Since the foot is fixed on the ground during stance, the leg must sweep back through an angle in order to guarantee that the torque on the hip will be zero while the body moves forward.
On the other hand, what must the balance servo do during flight to maintain balance?Notice how parallel this rhetorical question is to the previous—a nice touch! Since the foot must spend about as much time in front of the vehicle's center of gravity as behind it, the rate of travel and the duration of stance dictate a forward foot position for landing that will place the foot in a suitable spot for the next stance period. Thus during each flight the leg must swing forward under the direction of the balance servo, and during each stance it must sweep backward under the control of the attitude servo; the forward and back sweeping motions required for running are obtained automatically from the interplay of the servo-control loops for balance and attitude.
Marc H. Raibert and Ivan E. Sutherland, "Machines that Walk," Scientific American. |
Asking rhetorical questions as a translating technique
Explaining the importance
Some translating techniques work because they motivate readers. Sometimes readers need to be talked into concentrating on difficult technical discussion: one way is to explain to them or to remind them of the importance of what is being discussed. In this example, the last paragraph emphasizes the importance):
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It was Linus Pauling and his coworkers who discovered that sickle cell anemiaThe importance of this discovery is stated primarily in these two sentences. was a molecular disease.
This disease affects a very high percentage of black Africans, as high as 40 percent in some regions. About 9 percent of black Americans are heterozygous for the gene that causes the disease. People who are heterozygous for sickle cell anemia contain one normal gene and one sickle cell gene. Since neither gene in this case is dominant, half the hemoglobin molecules will be normal and half sickled. The characteristic feature of this disease is a sickling of the normally round, or platelike, red blood cells under conditions of slight oxygen deprivation. The sickled red blood cells clog small blood vessels and capillaries. The body's response is to send out white blood cells to destroy the sickled red blood cells, thus causing a shortage of red blood cells, or anemia.
The sickle cell gene originated from a mistake in information. A DNA molecule somehow misplaced a base, which in turn caused an RNA molecule to direct the cell to make hemoglobin with just one different amino acid unit among the nearly 600 normally constituting a hemoglobin molecule. So finely tuned is the human organism that this tiny difference is enough to cause death. Since the disease is nearly always fatal before puberty, how can a gene for a fatal childhood disease get so widespread in a population? The answer to this question gives some fascinating insight into the mechanism and purposes of evolution, or natural selection. The distribution of sickle cell anemia very closely parallels the distribution of a particularly deadly malaria-causing protozoan by the name of Plasmodium falciparum, and it turns out that there is a close connection between sickle cell anemia and malaria. Those people who are heterozygous for the sickle cell gene are relatively immune to malaria and, except under reasonably severe oxygen deprivation such as that found at high altitudes, they experience no noticeable effects due to the sickle cell gene they carry. Half the hemoglobin molecules in the red cells of heterozygous people are normal and half are sickled. 
Thus, under ordinary circumstances the normal hemoglobin carries on the usual respiratory functions of blood cells and there is little discomfort. On the other hand, the sickled hemoglobin molecules precipitate, in effect, when the malaria-causing protozoan enters the blood. The precipitated hemoglobin seems to crush the malaria protozoan, thus keeping the malaria from being fatal.
The significance of all this should be pondered.This pause underlines the importance of this process. Nature is willing to sacrifice approximately half the children in the malaria-infested regions of Africa so that the species can survive. The reason half the children die is that, on the average, approximately one-quarter of the children will be homozygous for abnormal hemoglobin and will die of sickle cell anemia, while one-quarter will be homozygous for normal hemoglobin and will likely die of malaria. The half of the population that is heterozygous will survive to reproduce. This means that the species, not the individual, is the ultimate unit of Darwinian evolution.
David S. Newman, An Invitation to Chemistry |
Explaining the importance as a way of translating technical content
Providing historical background
Discussion of the historical background of a technical subject helps readers because it gives them less technical, more general, and sometimes more familiar content. It gives them a base of understanding from which to launch into the more difficult sections of the discussion:
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Now that alcohol is being used in more and more social settings, it extremely important to recognize its teratogenic effects. Teratogenic, or malforming, agents produce an abnormal presence or absence of a substance that is required in physical development.
Although SullivanHistorical background, in this entire paragraph, traces the rise of the recognition of the teratogenic effects of alcohol on the physical development of the embryo. first reported on the effects of maternal drinking during pregnancy in 1899, the serious implications of his findings were virtually ignored for the next 50 years. It was not until the dramatic identification of a pattern of malformations, termed the fetal alcohol syndrome (FAS) by Jones et al in 1973, that the scientific community acknowledged the potential dangers of heavy maternal alcohol use. Since then, there has been increasing recognition that alcohol may be the most common drug in causing problems of malformations in humans.
Each morning in the soft, coral flush of daybreak, a laser dawns on Mars. Forty miles above frigid deserts of red stone and dust, it flares in an atmosphere of carbon dioxide. Infrared sunlight kindles in this gas a self-intensifying radiance that continuously generates as much energy as a thousand nuclear reactors. Our eyes are blind to it, but from sunrise to sunset Mars bathes in dazzling lasershine. The red planetHistorical background on the discovery of laser light on Mars may have lased in the sun for eons before astronomers identified its sky-high natural laser in 1980. The wonder is that its existence was unknown for so long. In 1898, in The War of the Worlds, H.G. Wells scourged earth with Martian invaders and a laserlike death ray. Pitiless, this "ghost of a beam of light" blasted brick, fired trees, and pierced iron as if it were paper.
In 1917 Albert Einstein speculatedThis entire paragraph is historical background that under certain conditions atoms or molecules could absorb light or other radiation and then be stimulated to shed their borrowed energy. In the 1950s Soviet and American physicists independently theorized how this borrowed energy could be multiplied and repaid with prodigious interest. In 1960 Theodore H. Maiman invested the glare of a flash lamp in a rod of synthetic ruby; from that first laser on earth he extorted a burst of crimson light so brilliant it outshone the sun.
Allen A. Boraiko, "The Laser: 'A Splendid Light,'" National Geographic. |
Historical background as a translation technique
Reviewing theoretical background
To understand some phenomena, technologies, or their applications, readers must first understand the principle or theory behind them. Theoretical content need not be over the heads of nonspecialist readers. Discussion of theory is often little more than explanation of the root causes and effects at work in a phenomenon or mechanism. In this example, the writer establishes the theory and then can go on to discuss the findings that have come about through the use of NMR on living tissue.
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Nonspecialists often wonder how the processes of life can be reduced to sequences of chemical reactions.Not a great example, but this points to the objections of a common person.
One technique is beginning to answer these questions by detecting chemical reactions as they occur inside cells, tissues and organisms including those of human beings. The technique is nuclear-magnetic-resonance (NMR) spectroscopy. It relies on the fact that atomic nuclei with an odd number of nucleons (protons and neutrons) have an intrinsic magnetism that makes each such nucleus a magnetic dipole: in essence a bar magnet. Such nuclei include the proton (H-1), which is the nucleus of 99.98 percent of all hydrogen atoms occurring in nature, the carbon-13 nucleus (C-13), which is the nucleus of 1.1 percent of all carbon atoms, and the phosphorus-31 nucleus (P-31), which is the nucleus of all phosphorus atoms.
Credit for the discovery of NMR goes to Isidor Isaac Rabi, who received the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1944Historical background here on he development of NMR (Discovery of NMR). The Purcell group at Harvard University and the Bloch group at Stanford University independently developed NMR spectroscopy in the late 1940s and early 1950s. Edward Mills Purcell and Felix Bloch shared the 1952 Nobel Prize in Physics for their inventions.——History of MRI. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nuclear_magnetic_resonance_spectroscopy |
Theoretical background as a translation technique
Combining the translating techniques
This last section concludes the techniques for translating difficult technical prose to be presented here. However, take a look at writing in fields you know about, and look for other kinds of translating techniques used there. Now, here are several extended passages of technical writing that combine several of these strategies.
Understanding AI Model (LLM) Parameters: A Chef's Guide
Seenivasa Ramadurai, AI Solution Architect#machinelearning #ai#llm #beginners 
When you hear about AI models, you'll see numbers like:
GPT-3 has 175 billion parameters These numbers are huge. But what do they mean? Are they storing that many facts? That many sentences? Let me break it down. Think About a Chef Imagine you're learning to cook.Here begins an extended comparison (analogy). You start with recipes, ingredients, and lots of practice. Over time, you don't just follow recipes anymore, you understand cooking. You know when to add more salt, how long to cook something, which spices work together. ....Parameters are not the training data. They're what the model learned from that data. Think of them as the chef's skill, experience, and intuition. When a chef cooks biryani 1,000 times, they learn:
Exactly how much salt balances the rice They didn't memorize 1,000 biryani recipes. They developed an understanding of how biryani works. That understanding—those tiny adjustments and decisions stored in their mind—that's what parameters are in AI. Imagine a student chef learning to make biryani. Here's what happensHere the analogy elaborates the process, another good method of translating the technical) :
Step 1: They cook the biryani (using their current knowledge) After 1,000 attempts, the student doesn't need the master chef anymore. They've internalized the patterns. They know instinctively how to make great biryani. This Is Exactly How AI Training WorksThe AI model reads billions of sentences from its training data. For each sentence, it:
Tries to predict the next word—"The cat sat on the____" Through this process, the model isn't memorizing sentences.Here the translation technique is what the process is not It's learning patterns:
By the end of training, those 1.7 trillion parameters contain all these learned patterns. They're like the compressed wisdom the model gained from reading all that text. 
Sreeni Ramadorai, "Understanding AI Model (LLM) Parameters: A Chef's Guide," https://dev.to/sreeni5018/understanding-ai-model-llm-parameters-a-chefs-guide-4469 (January 9, 2026). |
Translating techniques used in combination
Related Information
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I would appreciate your thoughts, reactions, criticism regarding this chapter: your response—David McMurrey.
